[Map] War_Deport (SVN)

[TristamK]

War_Deport
Map name : War_Deport v1.0
Map creator : Tristamk
Build version : 3
Date of start creating : 21 07 2013
Last ver. date : 21 07 2013
Links :
download/file.php?mode=view&id=6680
download/file.php?id=6699 - fixed version
download/file.php?id=7059 - SVN (witch minor error)
Link for video :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kzFPIu0CzbA
About map from author :
This a my newest map created specially for video (creating process showed on video. Speed of video increased in x12). I think for 3 hours its a good result. Will be in a future i will add more details for this map

[greaserpirate]

Great-looking map with some good paths!

Some things I'd improve:

There are a lot of places where I didn't know where to go (and lost time that way) or things I didn't know at the beginning that cost me time as well.
- During the first plunge into the pit, I had no idea there was a ledge, all I saw was a drop to my death. Maybe put some kind of indicators like lights around the entrance?
- I also didn't know I was supposed to go into the submarine.
- I expected the fan to slice me to shreds instead of push me upwards. I didn't lose a lot of time since it seemed to be the only way up, though.

Also, this is just my opinion, but I think it would be cool if the first part where the crates are submerged in blue water was changed so it had deadly green water. I played it safe and didn't touch the water, and going around the crates was pretty fun, and I think it also makes more sense to have polluted water near polluted water. It's your call though, either way is fine.

[TristamK]

During the first plunge into the pit, I had no idea there was a ledge, all I saw was a drop to my death. Maybe put some kind of indicators like lights around the entrance?

Fixed. New lamps placed here.

I also didn't know I was supposed to go into the submarine.

Hm. I add a small arrow near the entrance in submarine. Are this enough ?

I expected the fan to slice me to shreds instead of push me upwards. I didn't lose a lot of time since it seemed to be the only way up, though.

I did some changes in this place.

Also, this is just my opinion, but I think it would be cool if the first part where the crates are submerged in blue water was changed so it had deadly green water. I played it safe and didn't touch the water, and going around the crates was pretty fun, and I think it also makes more sense to have polluted water near polluted water. It's your call though, either way is fine.

Now blue water can kill. I didn't want change color of water, so i placed in water electricity cable with sparks. Also, for an explanation on different colors of waters in rooms created few doorsteps. Looks a bit unreal, but interesting.
Are i fix all, greaser ?

[qreeves]

The map could probably use a different name.

Good to see people using the other water types; Do they work okay for you, are they missing any features?

[TristamK]

Good to see people using the other water types; Do they work okay for you, are they missing any features?

Different water types work fine on this map. I didn't got any glitch's or errors with it .

[bonifarz]

I do like the flow of this map. A few people joined a game on this one, and I had the impression everyone enjoyed the map, beginners and skilled players alike.

The map could probably use a different name.

The intended name is war depot, not deport, right? I suggest to edit the topics title to avoid confusion.

Keep up the nice work.

[qreeves]

This map is now SVN. Congratulations on a cool map.

[TristamK]

This map is now SVN.

wow.
I didn't mind that this map can be included in SVN. Cool...
I thought don't work more with this but since it is included in the SVN I'll improve it

Congratulations on a cool map.

Thank you

[Dratz-_C]

Congratulations TristamK! I'll look for "War Depot" in the SVN.
Cheers

[TristamK]

Improved version of map.
Changelog :
-"legs" of barrels outside the start room improved a bit
-Precision of light changed a bit. Size of file increased but most of light error dispirited
-On the invisible from start room sides of object placed sky texture
-Invisible from start room objects deletes
-Small border to some platforms added
-Small border after falling added.
-Wire now look like a wire
-Corridor with laser now look MUCH better. (lasers look cool)
-All angles of rooms entrance to the room improved
-Added pusher in ventilation
-All tubes remaded where it;s possible
-top of submarine fixed
-Mapauthor fixed (added full name)
-Blendmap added outside the start room (grass deleted). Outside it look bad but from start room it looks OK.

Congratulations TristamK! I'll look for "War Depot" in the SVN.
Cheers

Thank you

[Dratz-_C]

Hi TristamK!
I liked the theme of your map. It felt like a real place. I have noticed something that you will want to fix. In the first area with the electrocuted water there is a line of water that should kill you but does not. Go all the way to the right against the window and you will find it. I'll attach a picture.

War_Depot.jpg

Cheers

[qreeves]

In the first area with the electrocuted water there is a line of water that should kill you but does not. Go all the way to the right against the window and you will find it.

I have fixed it in SVN.