Krobonil {l Wrote}:I think I got the right harmonies.
It was not easy to describe electric danger without getting too urban "^^
Good start, however I think I could still contain a little more of the "forest" feeling.
Krobonil {l Wrote}:I also tried to keep the genre of Wansti (the composer of many ST soundtracks)
Not a bad idea, but I think other stuff would be fine too as long as it fits into the general idea of the game.
Krobonil {l Wrote}:- Which rhythm will fit better?
The slower one at the beginning or the faster with the drum?
I think the faster one is a bit too fast for the game.
Krobonil {l Wrote}:- Is it enough creepy? Or maybe too much?
It could be a little less (only a little) creepy. You should hear a bit more of the forest, and you could put a little more highlight on the electricity in the water.
Krobonil {l Wrote}:With your inputs I will continue until 2:00 and make it loopable.
Note that we can also loop a defined (in seconds) part of the file (e.g. https://github.com/SuperTux/data/blob/master/music/forest.music): it will start from the beginning until it reaches loop-at where it will jump back to loop-begin. Then the part between loop-begin and loop-at will be looped until something else interrupts it.
(Note that this is just my opinion, I'd wait for more feedback from others)