I wrote a free culture (by-sa licensed) horror novel.

[Jastiv]

Actually, I wrote this novel years ago, but only recently have I made it available to the public. I also wrote a script that I could publish if anyone is truly interested in making a game or movie from it.
Anyway, I think it is better than anything Stephan King ever wrote, but I want some critique of it. Don't bother just saying you hate horror novels, because if you don't you don't need to read it in the first place, but if you like them, that I would say it is a must read.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/l9ij5792zlbdr ... 0.pdf?dl=0